a single source, nothing corroborates it
Make replying take one line
Aim the first message at getting any reply rather than a booked meeting, and end on a question the reader can answer in a few words. Explicitly inviting a negative answer makes responding feel cheap.
The method
- 01
Write the whole email as one short line that ends in a question the recipient can answer without effort.
- 02
Explicitly invite a negative reply in your sign-off, so answering feels low-stakes.
- 03
Give something of value in the email itself and make your ask the lowest-friction next step the prospect might accept, rather than a call with a stranger.
- 04
Set the goal of the first cold email at getting any reply at all, not at booking a meeting, because a reply is the thing you can build on.
What it returned
Dave Gerhardt's one-line email to a CEO for an exec coaching programme
Suggested rewrite asks for the recipient's opinion even if they think the product is rubbish
Attributed to Dave Gerhardt
Sources
- How to write a funny cold emailHarry Dry · Marketing Examples · Poor ending · undated
- Dave Gerhardt's 1 line sales emailHarry Dry · Marketing Examples · Dave Gerhardt's 1 line sales email · undated
- One thousand replies to cold emailsHarry Dry · Marketing Examples · One thousand replies to cold emails · undated
the second source
Three plays a week, for the phase you are in
No roundup of links, no news. Three tactics more than one builder arrived at separately, with the numbers each one returned and the disagreements left in.
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