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independenceone source
applies to

b2b and consumer, no audience needed

outcome not stated

confidence

low

evidence

4 claims · 1 articles · 3 receipts

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these articles carry no publication dates

a single source, nothing corroborates it

Repeat sounds and shapes so the line sticks

Memorability is mechanical rather than magical. Carry the reader between words with a repeated opening sound, close consecutive clauses on the same word, hold the same grammatical shape across them, and reuse words that share a root. None of it changes the meaning and all of it changes whether the line survives the day.


The method

  1. 01

    Alliterate to carry the reader from one word to the next.

  2. 02

    Close successive clauses with the same word to add a chime.

  3. 03

    Repeat the same grammatical shape across consecutive clauses to give a line rhythm.

  4. 04

    Repeat words that share a root to turn a phrase into something memorable.


What it returned

  • Named as epistrophe

  • Named as parallelism, one of eight devices found in a three-part slogan about a daily scoop

  • Named as polyptoton


Sources


the second source

Three plays a week, for the phase you are in

No roundup of links, no news. Three tactics more than one builder arrived at separately, with the numbers each one returned and the disagreements left in.

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the second source

Three plays a week, for the phase you are in

No roundup of links, no news. Three tactics more than one builder arrived at separately, with the numbers each one returned and the disagreements left in.

963 corroborated plays to draw from · 3 a week

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