2 builders who never spoke to each other
Engineer the last thing they read
Whatever sits at the end is what gets carried away, so the close deserves the same attention as the opening. Repeat the one message you need remembered even though you already made it, and finish with a short list of concrete things to do now, each pointing at a named person or a specific place.
The method
- 01
Close a long announcement with a short numbered list of things the reader can do today, each pointing at a named person or a specific channel.
- 02
Pick the one message you need remembered and close on it, repeating it at the end even if you already made it.
What it returned
The four actions given were: email Adam directly to arrange a prepayment, invite a friend, ask to be added to the Basecamp planning project, and email to book a walkthrough of the new space.
Katelyn Bourgoin applies this to ads, posts and keynotes alike: save the biggest benefit for the end, or restate it there.
Sources
- Recency Bias - Why We Buy 🧠Katelyn Bourgoin · customercamp.co · Finish strong · undated
- Not a Joke: Indy Hall v3.0 - The Future of Indy HallAlex Hillman · dangerouslyawesome.com · What happens next · 2012-04-01
the second source
Three plays a week, for the phase you are in
No roundup of links, no news. Three tactics more than one builder arrived at separately, with the numbers each one returned and the disagreements left in.
More in copy
- Keep the personality that drives some people off7 unconnected
- Interview buyers and write the page in their sentences6 unconnected
- Re-aim one durable claim at today's worry5 unconnected
- Answer the predictable objection with a specific4 unconnected
- Say the thing only you could have said4 unconnected
- Tighten the headline until only your segment fits4 unconnected