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independenceone source
applies to

b2b and consumer, no audience needed

outcome not stated

confidence

low

evidence

1 claims · 1 articles · 0 receipts

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2024-08-242024-08-24

a single source, nothing corroborates it

Rewrite outreach until every line is about them

Total silence on an outreach message is a diagnosis, not bad luck. Go through it line by line and remove anything that is about you, your product or your history, keeping only what the recipient gets.


The method

  1. 01

    If the outreach draws no replies at all, rewrite the message so every line is about what the recipient gets rather than about you.


Sources


the second source

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the second source

Three plays a week, for the phase you are in

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