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Point at what they are about to lose

Loss moves people more reliably than gain, so frame the headline around what the reader is currently ruining rather than what they could improve, and write the offer around which regret would be larger. Make it funny so the threat reads as entertainment rather than fear-mongering. Keep it to a dose, because a brand that only ever brings bad news becomes the thing people avoid.


The method

  1. 01

    Point at a threat or a potential loss rather than only at gains, using scarcity or negatively framed messaging, and make it funny so it lands as entertainment instead of fear-mongering.

  2. 02

    Frame the headline around what the reader is currently ruining rather than what they could improve.

  3. 03

    Keep the negative framing to a dose, because a brand that only ever brings bad news becomes the thing people avoid.

  4. 04

    Write the offer around which regret is larger, buying it or skipping it, rather than around the benefits.


What it returned

  • 16%

    The Snickers campaign built on the fear of losing social status was funny as well as memorable, and market share rose 16%.

  • 63

    Click-through on an article rises by an average of 63 percent when the title carries a negative superlative such as bad, worst or never instead of always or best; a Russian newspaper that flipped every headline positive in 2014 lost two-thirds of its readers within a day.

  • Katelyn Bourgoin's rule is that a little adversity drives action while too much makes buyers associate you with a dark cloud.

  • Rory Sutherland argues in The Choice Factory that people want to blend into a peer group rather than beat it, and will work harder to dodge embarrassment or a bad purchase than to look dominant.


Sources


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